Grammar suggestion. - 2016-09 cqf #134

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    • Type: Change Request
    • Resolution: Persuasive
    • Priority: Medium
    • Clinical Quality Information Framework (CQIF) [deprecated] (FHIR)
    • DSTU2
    • Clinical Decision Support
    • Clinical Reasoning Module [deprecated]
    • G4.2
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    • Richard Esmond/Brian Alper: 8-0-0
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      Existing Wording: [Protocol] A pre-defined procedural method written to standardize a set of activities. Protocols can be used within laboratory settings to standardize handling of specimens or the steps involved in a specific test, to describe the methodology for effective treatment of a particular condition, or the steps to be taken in a particular research trial.

      Proposed Wording: [Protocol] A pre-defined procedural method for standardizing a set of activities. As examples, protocols can be used within laboratory settings to standardize handling of specimens for specific tests; standardize the treatment steps for a particular condition; or standardize the steps to be taken in a particular research trial.

      Comment:

      Original sentence structure did not make clear that other types of protocols can exist. Also applies to G4.6, and potentially other places where the description is used.

      Summary:

      Grammar suggestion.

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            Reporter:
            Kensaku Kawamoto
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