Previous sentence already starts with "as a consequence" - 2018-May Core Norm Infrastructure #267

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    • Type: Technical Correction
    • Resolution: Persuasive
    • Priority: Medium
    • FHIR Core (FHIR)
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      Existing Wording: As a consequence, applications claiming conformance to this specification make the claim in respect of a specific exchange framework, and in regard to specific details about their usage of those frameworks and resource contents

      Proposed Wording: Applications claiming conformance to this specification make the claim in respect of a specific exchange framework and in regard to specific details about their usage of those frameworks and resource contents

      Comment:

      Shouldn't have two sentences in a row starting with "As a consequence". Also, the comma shouldn't be present because the phrases are dependent.

      Summary:

      Previous sentence already starts with "as a consequence"

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            Reporter:
            Lloyd McKenzie
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