General Clarity - BSeR #21

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    • Type: Technical Correction
    • Resolution: Persuasive
    • Priority: Medium
    • US Bidirectional Services eReferrals (BSeR) (FHIR)
    • STU3
    • Public Health
    • documentation [deprecated]
    • BSeR FHIR IG v0.2.0
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      Existing Wording: Through the programs operated by the NCCDPHP, the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC) works to prevent chronic diseases and reduce their health and financial costs with an approach that brings together monitoring to understand the problems, communities to work toward solutions and support healthy behaviors, and health care systems to detect problems early and help reduce or eliminate unhealthy behaviors.

      Proposed Wording: Through the programs operated by the NCCDPHP, the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC) works to prevent chronic diseases to reduce their health and financial costs with an approach that brings together monitoring. This is to understand the problems and communities to work toward solutions that support healthy behavior and health care systems to eliminate unhealthy behaviors early.

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      General Clarity

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            briana_barnes
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