This sentence is unclear. It may be best to make 'a' as an 'or' in the sentence. - CDex #36

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    • Type: Technical Correction
    • Resolution: Persuasive
    • Priority: Medium

      Existing Wording: They are looking to find new conditions, change in the status of existing conditions (based on HCC model), or predisposition for or risk of developing a condition, i.e. prediabetes.

      Proposed Wording: They are looking to find new conditions, change in the status of existing conditions (based on HCC model), or predisposition for a risk of developing a condition, i.e. prediabetes.

      Comment:

      Make 'a', an 'or'

      Summary:

      This sentence is unclear. It may be best to make 'a' as an 'or' in the sentence.

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            Reporter:
            briana_barnes
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