Existing Wording: A system acting as the Information Client POSTs or PUTs information onto a system acting as an Information Server using the FHIR API on the Information Server.

Proposed Wording: A system acting as the Information Client POSTs or PUTs information onto a system acting as an Information Server using the FHIR API.

Comment:

Suggestion: remove the last "on the Information Server"of the sentence.

Summary:

Suggestion: remove the last "on the Information Server"of the sentence.