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    • Type: Change Request
    • Resolution: Persuasive
    • Priority: Low
    • Shorthand (FHIR)
    • 0.12.0 [deprecated]
    • FHIR Infrastructure
    • Language Reference
    • 2.10
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      Comment relates to a non-normative part of the IG, but we will change the text to:

       
      "Every IG should provide examples of its profiles. Let's do that by introducing an example FishPatient named Shorty. "

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      Comment relates to a non-normative part of the IG, but we will change the text to:   "Every IG should provide examples of its profiles. Let's do that by introducing an example FishPatient named Shorty. "
    • Kramer/Rhodes: 14-0-0
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    • Non-substantive
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      Please consider re-phrasing the text into a more readable form

      Existing Wording:

      Every IG should provide examples of its profiles. We should provide an example instance of FishPatient. Our patient example is Shorty.

      Proposed Wording:

      Every IG should provide examples of its profiles, therefore are to provide an example instance of FishPatient. Let us do that by introducing an example patient fish named Shorty.

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            Reporter:
            ivan_zapreev
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