Rewrite confusing second sentence

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    • Type: Change Request
    • Resolution: Not Persuasive with Modification
    • Priority: Highest
    • US FHIR Guidance - Quality Reporting (FHIR)
    • 0.1 [deprecated]
    • Clinical Quality Information
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    • Rob Samples/Floyd Eisenberg: 19-0-1
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      Confusing second sentence (among other things it has no verb), suggest to rewrite it or collapse it with the first sentence.

      Existing Wording:

      This aggregate and detailed data serves the purpose of evaluating clinical performance, patient and care team details for continuous improvement, and key outcomes for healthcare organizations and other relevant parties (e.g. public health and payers). Detailed and related raw clinical data, key enrichments (e.g. situationally valuable inferences, new or ensuing clinical documentation), and information (or metadata) on clinical activities and local factors (e.g. CDS response rate, site of service setting and location).

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            ana_kostadinovska
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