Existing Wording
Style Conventions - this content represents information that may go over the wire this is the name of a data element

Proposed Wording
The information in the "Style Conventions" section is incomplete

Comments
What are the various style conventions? Please elaborate the reference for "This content" represents information that may go over the wire. The information that goes over the wire is "the name of a data element"?

Grahame's Comments
fix broken language